Magazine Advert Change

Magazine Advert

In class, Me and Jack showed the advert to our teacher. He said it was a good start but we need to add more colour towards the picture instead of just black and white. 

Orignal Advert: This was the version Me and Jack produced in lesson. Our teacher thought it was not standing out due to the plain colour of the text involved in the advert. 















Updated Version: To act on the comments made by our teacher, we decided to change the white text to bright red, this would go with the youtube logo in the corner. We then showed this to our teacher and we gained more feedback from our teacher. This version is now to bright and strain your eyes when looking at the advert. 

Final Version: This is the version Me and Jack produced and our teacher saw it as the best of all the above. This advert has the right mix of white and red text so its stands out but not to bright. We feel this will bring audience and viewers to view the band more and gain more viewers.